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科技英语写作基础:The anthropogenic salt cycle

已有 497 次阅读 2024-1-23 02:54 |个人分类:Scientific Writing|系统分类:论文交流

The goal is to learn how to write better.分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)

Green highlight is used to indicate good writing.

绿色好好学习。

Yellow means "questionable."

黄色:有问题

Blue calls for your attention.

蓝色:值得关注。

 

The anthropogenic salt cycle

https://www.nature.com/articles/s43017-023-00485-yIncreasing salt production and use is shifting the natural balances of salt ions across Earth systems, causing interrelated effects across biophysical systems collectively known as freshwater salinization syndrome. In this Review, we conceptualize the natural salt cycle and synthesize increasing global trends of salt production and riverine salt concentrations and fluxes. The natural salt cycle is primarily driven by relatively slow geologic and hydrologic processes that bring different salts to the surface of the Earth. Anthropogenic activities have acceleratedthe processes, timescales and magnitudes of salt fluxes and altered their directionality, creating an anthropogenic salt cycle. Global salt production has increased rapidly over the past century for different salts, with approximately 300 Mt of NaCl produced per year. A salt budget for the USA suggests that salt fluxes in rivers can be within similar orders of magnitude as anthropogenic salt fluxes, and there can be substantial accumulation of salt in watersheds. Excess salt propagates along the anthropogenic salt cycle, causing freshwater salinization syndrome to extend beyond freshwater supplies and affect food and energy production, air quality, human health and infrastructure. There is a need to identify environmental limits and thresholds for salt ions and reduce salinization before planetary boundaries are exceeded, causing serious or irreversible damage across Earth systems.

1.  Review: I would use the lower case;

2.   increasing global trends of salt production and riverine salt concentrations and fluxes: increasing global trends of salt production and ofriverine salt concentrations and fluxes;

3.   to extend beyond freshwater supplies and affect food and energy production, air quality, human health and infrastructure: to extend beyond freshwater supplies and to affect food and energy production, air quality, human health and infrastructure;

4.   and reduce: and to reduce

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