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         改        错

 

 

以下是一个学生的课堂笔记片断.

老师在黑板上写了句子,要求学生改错

Holding her in his arms, the moon hid behind the clouds

 

学生A的结果:

As soon as the moon hid behing the clouds, he hold her in his arms.

B的结果:

After holding her in his arms , the moon hid behind the clouds.

C的结果:

Hold her in his arms then the moon hid behind the moon.

D 的结果:

ehind the clouds, he hold the moon in her arms

E的结果

The moon hold her in his arms behind the clouds.

F 的结果:

The clouds hid the moon ,and hold her in his arms

G的结果:

He don’t hold her in his arms, finding his teacher like the moon behind the clouds.



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