The goal is to learn how to write better.

分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)。

Sea-level driven land conversion and the formation of ghost forests

 https://www.nature.com/articles/s41558-019-0488-7?utm_source=nclimate_etoc&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=toc_41558_9_6&utm_content=20190529&WT.ec_id=NCLIMATE-201906&sap-outbound-id=2D8573EA9C94547BA72DC7835EE88615A167F928&mkt-key=005056B0331B1EE889D67AD104987739

Abstract

Green highlight is used to show good writing

好好学习：用绿色标出。

Yellow means "questionable."

黄色=“？”

Ghost forests created by the submergence of low-lying land are one of the most striking indicators of climate change along the Atlantic coast of North America. 

Although dead trees at the margin of estuaries were described as early as 1910, recent research has led to new recognition that the submergence of terrestrial land is geographically widespread, ecologically and economically important, and globally relevant to the survival of coastal wetlands in the face of rapid sea level rise. 

This emerging understanding has in turn generated widespread interest in the physical and ecological mechanisms influencing the extent and pace of upland to wetland conversion. 

Choices between defending the coast from sea level rise and facilitating ecosystem transgression will play a fundamental role in determining the fate and function of low-lying coastal land.

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