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已有 3580 次阅读 2007-6-19 07:18 |个人分类:英文训练场|系统分类:人文社科| 小母土, 一字师

在心目中,您已经成为我的老师了,不仅是一字师。

We will miss him when he’s gone ,的确是我的英文练笔。

感谢您指出我百字文的10处问题,并且进行了纠正。

曾经参加过科学院的考博辅导英语班,由于掌握的词汇太少,做英译中时差错很多,被辅导老师

评价为:理解力不够。

所以,以后如果再有英文习作的话,望不吝赐教,不胜感激!

修改后习作如下:

 He’s gone, left the Downing Street without any  word.

A hero, a real hero, though left ,though defeat.

It is Iraq War that is to blame ,not you or your activities.

As an acute politician, you had to made .....

O, Tony Blair!

I will miss you ,not only because of your departure,but also  your bravery.

A MAN who dare to face dangers.

May You smile, without any bitterness or cry. For bitterness or biting should give you interesting feeling.

That’s what you want to  and  like to .....

May Tony say: Please do not miss me after my departure, the end is also the beginning! And i like

it!

附录:小母土老师的评论原文

是博主的大作么?意思挺好,就是有一些语法错误(不好意思,我是英语语言专业出身的编辑,职业病)
第一行:any 和a 只能保留一个
第三行:Who should be to blame, 应为that should be blamed 或者that is to blame.
第四句:a 应该为an
第六句:beccause 应为 because of 或者改为for
第八句:bitter 是形容词,两个都应该为bitterness

最后一句:my left ,left 是动词,应该为Departure

the end is also a beginning, 前后要统一,要么是an end is also a beginning, 要么是the end is also the beginning.



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