Dear Li Ming,

这一篇语法错误似乎不多，没有看不懂的地方。

I have known that you will be a senior students this year,and you are willing to know whether you should stay at school or go home afterschool. As a good friend, I think that you should stay at school.

First, there areis a studyatmosphere in school. Whenever you went home, you will be eager to rest, but inschool, everyone areis studying, it will encourage you to follow themhim. Second, if you have any promble(problem),you can talk with your classmates, or go to teacher’s officeto ask your teachers. At home, you also may lookit up on Net Internet, but I don’t think you will do it when youuse your phone. As a proverbs goes, “All workand no play makes Jack a dull boys.” You canplay basketball at evening after a hard-day’s studyas well.

Stay at school,you will enjoy a lot of things.