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An unforgettable travel

Everyone has his ownlife. During the life, we may be thought having done something wrong which we actually have not donein anunproper way. So ammay I.

WhenI was only five, my family paid (somebody) a visit visited to Xian. Thejourney was very happy and we all enjoyed ourselves. But at the last day westayed inat Xian, there was 100 yuan slipping out of my mother’spocket and nowhere to find (it). But the pocketremains (remained) there. So my mother thoughtsomeone took the moneyfrom the pocket and asked me whether I took the money out of the pocket and Isaid no(I didn’t). but my mother didn’t believe (it). She said:”I acknowledgethoughtyou as are ansincerehonest boy, but you are lieing(lying)”

When mymother say said (this) to me like this, I felt the sky dropped to the earth(有这种表达吗？). People always believe what they think is right even if it is wrong, it is only when they see the evidences are given that they will realize what is truly right.As a son, I never do things that is(are) contrary to my mother’s mind. So I was very sad after the happy trip. 妈妈认为这句话应该这样写：People always judge other people notby what they actually do, but by their own judgment. This forms prejudice onone thing and it is not easy to change. It is only when they see the evidencesthat they will realize their prejudice is wrong. But sometimes we cannot findthe evidences to proof ourselves, and then we have to bear the guilt that Ididn’t commit. As a son, I never disobey to my mother at that time, her mistrustmade me very sad.

An unforgettable travel

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Everyone has hisown life. During the life, we may be thought having done something wrong whichwe actually have not done. So may I.

When I was onlyfive, my family visited to Xian. The journey was very happy and we all enjoyedourselves. But at the last day we stayed atXian, there was 100 yuan slipping out of my mother’s pocket and nowhere to find(it). But the pocket remainedthere. So my mother thought someone took the moneyfrom the pocket. She asked me whether I took the money and Isaid (I didn’t). but my mother didn’t believe (it). She said:”I thoughtyou are an honest boy, but you are (lying)”

But I didn’t. People always judge other people not by what they actuallydo, but by their own judgment. This forms prejudice on one thing and it is noteasy to change. It is only when they see the evidences that they will realizetheir prejudice is wrong. But sometimes we cannot find the evidences to proofourselves, and then we have to bear the guilt that I didn’t commit. As a son, Inever disobey to my mother at that time, her mistrust made me very sad.