一般而言,读者希望尽快读到主句中的主语或主题。如果主语显而易见,句子理解起来会更容易。而当一个句子展开后迟迟不见主语或主题,读者就很难明白这句话到底要说什么。因此,要避免使用长的介绍性词语和长主语。 例 1 : Due to the nonlinear and hence complex nature of ...
练习: 下面的 4 个句子中,评审人所使用的单词近乎一样,但句子结构的不同。哪种表达最能让人认为论文被接受了? A: Overall, although this manuscript is of interest for structural biologists, a more detailed analysis of ABC should be provided. ...
多余的词和短语是对其他的词和短语的过度修饰。科技论文中很多句子显得复杂是因为冗长 , 作者应该尽可能简洁、明晰。 例: High pH values have been observed to occur in areas that have been determined to have few pine trees. ...
例 1 原句: Fractions of 0.8ml were collected, reduced to dryness , and dissolved in 3.75% methanol (v/v) prior to being sequenced. 修改: Fractions of 0.8ml were collected, dried , and dissolved in 3.75% methanol (v/v) prior to being ...